I was very close to finishing my publication and decided I needed to get some feedback, so I went around the studio to see if anyone was available to look at my book and some people were which was great news to me.
- Who is the audience?
- Where should it be published? Wikileaks?
- Binding? Construction? Style?
- You could use the big facts across two pages?
- Like the illustrations.
- Like high lighted words.
- Pis top copy is missing somr copy. Reliable way of...
- Graphs need a compression year from 90s or another year.
- Maybe make the type a bit smaller x2.
- make the body copy abit smaller. everything seems abit to bunched.
- Legibility is good, easy to read graphs.
- Page 05- Disipline and punishment needs or doesn't need a quote in it.
- Facts are interesting leave them, emphasise the hierachy more/
- Page 07- Title graph. Scale doesn't empasise the amount you are seen on CCTV.
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